Thursday, December 09, 2010

Agent Pitch Contest starts today! Extended Deadline!

EXTENDED DEADLINE: Sat 8AM EST.

It's time for our December agent twitter pitch contest!

Today, the pitch is being judged by Josh Adams from Adams Literary.


Here are some other interviews to help you get to know their taste and style:
Josh Adams Interview
Agent Spotlight on Josh Adams
Tracey Adams Interview

Winner:
Gets to submit the manuscript pitched for consideration! (Thanks Josh! :)

When: Begins today, (Thurs Dec 9th) at 10AM EST and ends tomorrow (Fri, Dec 10) at midnight EST (I will close comments when it officially ends so if you get a comment in, you are counted.)

Why Twitter pitch? Because if you can't get your book in a Twitter pitch, you need to work on narrowing down the story and hook. You can check your character count either on Word (file, Tools/Word Count/Characters with spaces), on Twitter, or here.

Eligibility/Rules:
  • Your pitch MUST only be 140 characters to be counted so please check it twice! This includes spaces and punctuation so you might have to be creative. If your pitch is over 140 characters when I test it, it will not be eligible.
  • Your pitch must be for children. No adult books. They do not represent them.
  • This is for unagented/unpublished book writers only. (if you've published articles or essays - you may enter!)
  • You can only enter ONCE so choose wisely!
  • You must be a follower of my blog (and I'd love to see you on Twitter too). It's only fair to those who are .
What To include: In the comments you MUST leave the following information to be considered:
  • title of book
  • genre
  • your Twitter (140 characters) pitch
  • your email
Example:
Title - Untraceable
Genre - YA Survival Suspense
Email - sjohannes@bilaninc.com

Pitch - When her forest-ranger father disappears,Grace uses her survival skills to search the NC mtns & finds a secret group plotting against nature

References: Here are a few articles on writing short, one sentence pitches:

Nathan Bransford (agent)
Rachel Gardner (agent)
Query Tracker
Scribe Chat
140 character pitch

Winner(s) will be announced next week!

Good luck!

83 comments:

  1. Anonymous10:29 AM

    The Curse of Elizabeth Brewster

    YA- Paranormal Thriller

    truekingsley@me.com

    Pitch:

    Cursed, Eli must unravel a dark Puritan secret, embrace an ancient society, and face a love that defies time to save herself from evil.

    ReplyDelete
  2. Title: SLIPPERAGE

    Genre: YA Sci Fi Fairytale Retelling

    Email: jenilyntolley@gmail.com

    Pitch: Zuku (a boy-king who can talk to machines, but not to girls) has to save 12 princesses from an endless ball after they rip a hole in space.


    Thanks so much for this contest!

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  3. ROCK 'N' ROLL PRINCESSES WEAR BLACK
    Humorous Contemporary Realistic Fiction MG
    kellyp123atcomcastdotnet

    Stef’s overlooked at home and taunted at school.Will a concert, medical emergency, and hoedown change her or will her individuality persist?

    ReplyDelete
  4. This worked in my twitter...


    Title- BLACKBIRD
    Genre- YA Fantasy Thriller
    Email- kyle(at)skyledavis(dot)com
    Pitch:

    Elfin spy-school recruiters die saving her, so Taylor takes on their last mission: discover what sorcerers are stealing before they kill her

    ReplyDelete
  5. Title: Colors Like Memories
    Genre: YA Paranormal
    Email: mrs.which (@) gmail.com
    Pitch:
    Julia’s secret: she killed the guy she loved. It was an accident—sorta. Now she must save her best friend, but her ghosts won’t make it easy

    ReplyDelete
  6. Thanks for another fabulous contest!!

    TITLE: THE GHOST WRITER
    GENRE: YA Ghost story
    EMAIL: marcykate(a)gmail.com

    Tessa denies the 1st letter. She rationalizes the 2nd. When the accidents begin, there's no ignoring the ghosts in the theatre next door.

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  7. Title: Bittersweet Melody
    Genre: YA Paranormal Romance
    Email: dorothyanndreyer@gmail.com
    Pitch:

    Being a teen can suck - as muse Melody discovers when she is forced to choose between the human boy she loves and her immortality.

    ReplyDelete
  8. Thank you, Shelli!

    PREPARE TO BE REPAIRED
    MG Fantasy Adventure

    Eighth grade is a villain's senior year, but Robert has no plans to graduate, what with his evil twin plotting revenge on the headmaster.

    katrina (dot) lantz (at) gmail (dot) com

    ReplyDelete
  9. Title: GORGEOUS BOYFRIEND + KILLER GHOSTS = MY SUMMER VACATION

    Genre: YA Urban Fantasy

    E-mail: tessadevan at hotmail dot com

    Pitch:
    When ghost seer Kayley realizes she can't identify killer ghosts, she wonders if her boyfriend is a homicidal ghost out to murder her.

    ReplyDelete
  10. Title: THE SLEEPERS
    Genre: YA fantasy
    Email: michelle@michellesussman.com

    Elite fighter. Adoptee. Rage-filled teen with untamed magic. Will Lianne protect or destroy when lies & betrayal threaten the kingdom?

    ReplyDelete
  11. Title: SEAN MCDONALD'S ELIXIR OF INFINITE WISDOM

    Genre: Contemporary MG

    To earn money for his dying sister's last wish, 12-year-old Sean McDonald enlists a crazy Irishman to help him make and sell wisdom elixir.

    bonny.anderson@gmail(dot)com

    Thanks Shelli and Josh!

    ReplyDelete
  12. Title: Edge of the Falls.
    Genre: YA Dystopian
    Email: nazareanandrews@gmail.com

    Pitch:
    It should be an easy choice--give up choice in favor of protection. But when love is an option, no matter how dangerous, nothing is easy.

    ReplyDelete
  13. Title: Anchoring the Rain
    Genre: YA Fantasy Adventure

    As if accidentally freeing an imprisoned necromancer weren't bad enough, Denton must rescue the girl the so-called God of Death has kidnapped.

    Email: writer(at)DebSalisbury(dot)com

    ReplyDelete
  14. Title: Time Breaker
    Genre: Contemporary YA Sci-fi/Fantasy
    Email: davinashbury (at) gmail (dot) com

    After teenage Aly discovers she's a time walker she must convince her allies she's not the Time Breaker, while stopping her brother, who is.

    ReplyDelete
  15. Title: Library Jumpers
    Genre: YA Urban Fantasy

    Pitch:Yanked into a gateway book that links the great libraries, Gia finds that she's a long lost knight and must now fight to stop an apocalypse.

    Email: bdrake(at)comcast(dot)net

    ReplyDelete
  16. Title: A Willow's tale

    Genre: M/G fantasy

    Email: mculi@aol.com

    Pitch: Eleven-year-old Amber discovers her power to control the wind is the key to stop an evil fae's plague on the human and faerie worlds.

    ReplyDelete
  17. Title: 9:59 REWIND
    Genre: Edgy YA with magical realism/paranormal elements
    Email: candaceganger[at]yahoo[dot]com

    Pitch: At 9:58 pm Thursday Night Scum singer, C.J. Greyson, catches a bullet to the chest. But at 9:59 pm, she presses rewind.

    ReplyDelete
  18. Thanks for the contest!

    Title: HEIST
    Genre: MG contemporary fantasy (time travel)
    Email: laurapauling@yahoo.com

    A thirteen-year-old boy's struggle for truth. His dad. The cute girl. Her kidnapping. An art heist. And an impossible decision.

    ReplyDelete
  19. Title: Not Your Average Fairy Tale
    Genre: YA Fantasy

    Armed with wings and a blue wand, being a fairy godmother should be easy. Unless your name is, Ash. And you're a dude.

    email: chantelesedgwick(at)yahoo(dot)com

    ReplyDelete
  20. Alexia's Pen
    YA Fantasy
    Nicole.Zoltack@gmail.com

    When fifteen-year-old Alexia is given a magical pen, she discovers the Land of Imagining, a world overrun by demons that only she can save.

    ReplyDelete
  21. Title: Devolutionaries
    Genre: YA dystopian
    email: shalleemcarthur [at] gmail [dot] com

    Ash must sacrifice his ability to talk in order to hone the telepathic skills he needs to rescue his grandpa from a Government experiment.

    ReplyDelete
  22. Title: Wayward Angels
    Genre: MG Fantasy
    email: Xia@Gooberella.com



    Seriously? A Therapy dog? What can an abandoned mutt teach a 15-year old tough girl who isn’t afraid of anything—except of dogs.

    ReplyDelete
  23. Title - Saltwater

    Genre - Contemporary YA

    Email - camarshallwrites@gmail.com

    Pitch - After the death of Tavi's little brother, her family wins the lottery and falls apart. Tavi's gotta keep it together & fend off a stalker.

    ReplyDelete
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  25. Thanks for this contest!! :D

    Title: Out of My Body
    Genre: YA paranormal (55,000 words)
    Email: moni.bw at gmail dot com

    Tanya needs to do everything to save her mom’s kidnapped soul—even if it means risking her life & becoming a US Government out-of-body spy.

    ReplyDelete
  26. Title: Ben Holloway: Time Guardian
    Genre: MG Action-Adventure Mystery

    email: jenswan1222@yahoo.com


    Kidnappings. Angry Ghosts. War. Time Travel can really ruin your day.

    ReplyDelete
  27. Title- 1790: On The Edge
    Genre- Middle Grades Historical Fiction
    E-mail- annbbraden @ gmail dot com

    In 1790, a stranger’s death prompts 5 teens to overcome barriers of race and class in search of the truth. Independence itself is at stake.

    Thanks very much!

    ReplyDelete
  28. Title - Seventy-Seven

    Genre - Urban Fantasy YA

    Email - chanelle(@)chanellegray(.)com

    Pitch - As Death's daughter, it's Winter's job to kill those who appear on her list. Until she falls in love with her next case and he won't die.

    ReplyDelete
  29. Title - Scott and the Naughty Boy Factory

    Genre - Chapter Book

    Email - mrso_d at yahoo dot com

    Pitch - The Naughty Boy Factory transforms boys into Scott’s worst nightmare—perfect gentlemen—and Scott is not about to let that happen to him.

    ReplyDelete
  30. PERFECTION

    YA Dystopian

    ebysswriter@yahoo.com

    Created to rid the world of imperfections, a genetically-engineered girl learns there is more to her than what she was bred to be.

    ReplyDelete
  31. Title: Angel of the Waters
    Genre: YA urban fantasy

    Monster slayer, Feng Huang, finds there’s something out there more intimidating than horned freaks: the parents she never knew she had.

    hollyloiseau @ hotmail dot com

    ReplyDelete
  32. Title - THE DEMONS YOU KNOW
    Genre - YA Urban Fantay
    Email - sarah.nicolas.ya(at)gmail(dot)com

    Pitch -
    1. Rescue her mother from demons.
    2. Deny the dark power of the Books.
    3. Find love with a young Holy Knight.
    -- Miranda can only pick two

    ReplyDelete
  33. Title - The Enamel Gnome
    Genre - MG Fantasy
    Email - dlwright@outer-net.com
    Pitch - A nasty gnome, an ogre, a ninja fairy, a monstrous nerd, a Titan and 300 samurai rats. What else would you expect after losing a tooth?

    ReplyDelete
  34. Title: INVISIBLE
    Genre: Paranormal YA
    Email: geistfeldj@yahoo.com
    Pitch: When Angeline goes from ‘INVISIBLE’ to disappearing, she discovers that being noticed is a little more interesting than she anticipated.

    ReplyDelete
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  36. Title of book:
    Why My Love Life Sucks: The Legend of Gilbert the Fixer

    Genre:
    YA Humorous Science Fantasy (like Doctor Who or The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy)

    Pitch:
    Gilbert had big plans. He was going to fix the world, and it was going to be perfect. But a funny thing happened on the way to the future...

    Email:
    shevi.arnold@hotmail.com

    ReplyDelete
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  38. Free Bread Girl
    YA Contemporary

    When repeated scholarship rejections bombard Mattie, she must reach out for her one last hope to find a cure for Gran’s fatal disease.

    sixbird(at)msn(dot)com

    ReplyDelete
  39. MELISMA
    YA Light Fantasy
    karenmkrueger(at)gmail(dot)com

    After a breakdown Tessa gives up singing,but when she enters a world where music is magic she must find her voice if she ever wants to leave

    ReplyDelete
  40. TITLE: THE FOREST AVENGERS

    GENRE: Middle Grade Adventure
    with magical realism

    EMAIL: cskrutowski@gmail.com

    Jason must save the Blue Karner butterflies from a poacher who is stealing them for their power to grant a wish to whoever catches it first.

    ReplyDelete
  41. LOVE this! Thanks Josh for the opportunity!

    Title - Counting with Bella and Finny - A Poodle See Poodle Doo Book
    Genre - Picture Book
    Email - Bonnie@bellaandfinny.com

    Pitch - Poodles driving cars, washing dishes and flipping pancakes oh my! Children can laugh and learn counting hilarious photos of real dogs!

    ReplyDelete
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  43. Title - Black Amethyst
    Genre - YA Magical Realism
    Email - sgairden@gmail.com

    Pitch - Alissa is alone and hunted. So when a celestial fox-boy offers to help her save her mom, she can't fumble the chance. Lucky stars much?

    ReplyDelete
  44. Thanks for this contest!

    Title - JOSHUA FALLEN AND THE MATTER OF DARKNESS
    Genre - MG Science Fiction
    Email - mvkevin (at) gmail (dot) com

    Pitch - 13-year-old Joshua Fallen awoke with the ability to wield dark matter, and then found out only he could save the universe from destruction.

    ReplyDelete
  45. Title: The Spiritualists

    Genre: Contemporary Middle Grade Mystery

    Email: fosteralli@bellsouth.net

    Pitch: The mountain. The secret. A mission from Gran: find the natural bridge, find the truth. Don’t be scared, Oliver. You are not alone.

    ReplyDelete
  46. Title: Some Kind of Trouble

    Genre: YA Contemporary

    Pitch: After a drive-by shooting leaves Arianna with an unexpected boyfriend, she finds that love alone won’t save him from life on the streets.

    elizabeth.arroyo5@gmail.com

    ReplyDelete
  47. Title: SPITFIRE

    Genre: YA Fantasy

    Email: shayda.bakhshi (at) gmail (dot) com

    When Mattie's gift of fire is discovered, she must escape to a world where magic rules--and where having her gift is punishable by death.

    ReplyDelete
  48. Thanks for the contest.

    Title: Unraveled
    Genre: YA Mystery
    Email: bradley_susan(at)yahoo(dot)com

    Pitch: Sixteen year old Autumn dreams of being an FBI profiler so when her sister is murdered she investigates on her own and sets a dangerous trap to catch the killer.

    ReplyDelete
  49. Thank you!

    Title: Kinesthesia
    Genre: YA alternate history
    Email: nora.e.coon[at]gmail[dot]com

    Meriwether Davis leaves home to escape a future as a fisherman’s wife – the chance to fight Nazis is just a bonus.

    ReplyDelete
  50. Title: Pieces of Moon
    Genre: YA magic realism
    Email: jessicaloliveros(at)gmail(dot)com

    Belize is a perfect summer escape for Tess. The 15th century, a cursed Mayan city, & a Spanish soldier that hates her? Not so perfect.

    ReplyDelete
  51. Title – The Lion Awakens

    Genre – YA

    E-mail – Buffy@ydr.com

    Pitch – Modern David vs. Goliath. 2 teens find gifts that lead to parallel universe and an enemy hell-bent on taking over their world. Trilogy.

    ReplyDelete
  52. Title: Caenus And The Quiver Of Artemis

    Genre: YA Historical Fantasy

    Email: cs_ledbetter@yahoo.com

    Pitch: When a Greek prince loses the Isthmian games, he is banished from his kingdom. A wise centaur trains him and helps him to return home.

    ReplyDelete
  53. Man getting the pitch down to 140 characters is hard. Thanks for having this contest though!

    Title: THE PLASTIC SLIPPER

    Genre: Upper MG Fairy tale

    Email: phanhnguyen1 @ yahoo.com

    Pitch: Getting a happily ever after is hard. But when Rosy’s evil cousin makes her get amnesia & forget she’s a princess, its damn near impossible.

    ReplyDelete
  54. Thanks so much for the awesome contest.

    Title: THE THIRD TOWER
    Genre: Upper middle grade fantasy
    E-mail: rmarma2@yahoo.com
    Pitch: Jasmine convinces her BFF to follow a talking doorknob. Now she must learn how her adoptive mom’s love unlocks her magic or watch him die.

    ReplyDelete
  55. Thank you, Ms. Shelli, this is fantastic!

    Title: The Song of the Summer King

    Genre: MG Fantasy

    Email: jessowen.writer@gmail.com

    Pitch: Shard is a gryfon in danger of exile. After learning the secret of his past, he must decide whether to fight with his king - or against him.

    ReplyDelete
  56. Title: MAX IS DEAD
    Genre: YA
    E-mail: tab[at]zaeya[dot]com
    Pitch: Max is young. Obnoxious. And dead. And he's going to stay that way unless he can figure out how to get one person on earth to wish him back.

    ReplyDelete
  57. Title: EVERNOW

    Genre: Dystopian YA

    Email: Greyvaledesigns@gmail.com

    Pitch: Fey folk may have displaced humans, but Evernow is determined to find peace between those who caused a cataclysm and those who survived it.

    ReplyDelete
  58. Title: WHAT WAS MINE
    Genre: YA Contemporary
    Email: speak_to_bidisha@yahoo.co.in
    Pitch: When you're living on pretense, you need more than booze and weed to save you. Ronni's learning it the hard way.

    ReplyDelete
  59. Title - I'm Here to Save Your Day
    Genre - MG Adventure/Fantasy
    Email - iwillwhisperno(@)gmail.com
    Pitch - A brazen boy faces a playground bully to reclaim the jungle gym, only to discover the bully's mom– the lunch lady— is a far worse enemy.

    ReplyDelete
  60. Title: RUMP

    Genre: MG Fantasy

    email: sendliesl@gmail.com

    If a name determines your destiny, then Rump’s destiny really stinks, and spinning gold only makes things worse.

    ReplyDelete
  61. Title: In the Shadows
    Genre: Paranormal Romance
    Pitch:
    When the hottie from Emily's recurring dream shows up at school, she discovers her prophetic powers. But dream guys and family secrets can have a serious dark side.
    jenross(at)yahoo(dot)com

    ReplyDelete
  62. gah! These are so good!

    and I love all the new people I'm meeting :)

    Good luck to all.

    ReplyDelete
  63. Title: Moriarty's Ink
    Genre: MG Fantasy Adventure
    email: heatherzundel[AT]gmail(dot)com

    Abigail's family can enter books but when a strange teen uses their machine they must stop him before both book & real worlds are destroyed.

    ReplyDelete
  64. Title: requiem
    Genre: YA Contemporary
    email: apinchofpanache@gmail.com


    When his “perfect” older brother commits suicide, Ben must unravel the enigma that was his brother's life in order to move on with his own.

    ReplyDelete
  65. Title: THE ALYSCRAI
    Genre: YA Steampunk Adventure
    email: deren(dot)hansen(at)gmail(dot)com

    Alysseren evades war machines to stop a rebellion when she learns the tochtin, lemur-like familiars, will use their human hosts as weapons.

    ReplyDelete
  66. Title - LOCK 19

    Genre - YA Science Fiction

    Email - sabrina.wolford(at)gmail(dot)com

    Pitch - When Tabby's brother is killed, his rebel friends need her help to stop a clone war. The problem is, her dad's the one creating the army.

    ReplyDelete
  67. Anonymous5:55 PM

    Title: Kwizera Means Hope
    Genre: YA
    Email: vtremp@yahoo.com

    Pitch: Rwandan teen struggles to care for her family and save enough money to pay for school despite the survivor guilt that threatens her efforts.

    ReplyDelete
  68. Anonymous5:55 PM

    Title: Kwizera Means Hope
    Genre: YA
    Email: vtremp@yahoo.com

    Pitch: Rwandan teen struggles to care for her family and save enough money to pay for school despite the survivor guilt that threatens her efforts.

    ReplyDelete
  69. Title - The Secret of Elijah

    Genre - YA Historical Fiction

    Email - shavriluk@bellsouth.net

    Pitch - Leah searches for her brother Elijah, kidnapped by a hoodoo conjurer, and falls for both a man-ghost and a Civil War soldier who aid her.

    ReplyDelete
  70. I apologize if this double-posts; I'm having technology trouble.

    Title: Countdown to Mourning
    Genre: YA fantasy
    Email: regiddings [at] gmail [dot] com

    Liria knows a sorcerer wants to overthrow Voltara & its laws against magic. Can she convince them to trust her when she uses magic herself?

    ReplyDelete
  71. Title- The Siren Song
    Genre- YA paranormal romance
    Email- christinaferko(at)gmail.com

    Pitch-
    One song can destroy two lives. When Coral meets Jackson, her siren song crashes over him, pulling them both down into its unknown depths.

    ReplyDelete
  72. Title: FATE CREST

    Genre: YA Fantasy

    Email: kanonei (at) gmail (dot) com

    Pitch: Angelyn Bowmoore, the first female knight in known history, must do everything in her power to claim her birthright at the Knights Academy.

    ReplyDelete
  73. Title: What a Boy Wants
    Genre: YA contemporary romance
    email: kdvitollo (AT) yahoo (DOT) com

    Pitch:
    Sebastian is his school’s best secret,The Hook-up Artist. Too bad his undercover matchmaking skill didn’t prepare him for falling in love.

    ReplyDelete
  74. Title: Fulcrum
    Genre: YA sci-fi
    email: rachel.searles(at)gmail.com

    An amnesiac boy seeking his identity must navigate his way through a dangerous galaxy after the planet where he first awoke is destroyed.

    ReplyDelete
  75. Title: Gates of Hell

    Genre: YA Historical Fiction

    Email: abbrashear@yahoo.com

    Pitch:
    15 Y/O Gerhard cant stand by & let his adoptive father Heinrich Himmler & the Nazis do to his pal Ari, what has been done to a # of Jews

    ReplyDelete
  76. Title: Out There

    Genre: YA Historical Fiction

    Pitch: When Carly’s dad defends Perry Smith in court she must come to grips with the attacks @ her family for defending the man that killed her BFF

    Email: acbrashear@yahoo.com

    ReplyDelete
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  78. Title: Sing Me Away
    Genre: YA Contemporary
    Email: tencentnotes@gmail.com

    Anya forgot how to live. Since her bandmates died she's felt numb; now, in a summer without music, she has to learn how to be herself again.

    ReplyDelete
  79. Title: The Cipher of Anu-k'ai
    Genre: MG Adventure/Mystery
    Email: hpinski@gmail.com

    The search for a lost treasure leads Abigail and Quin deep into a clandestine world—and even deeper into a mountain forged by A.I.

    ReplyDelete
  80. TITLE: The Bleeding Cure
    GENRE: YA Paranormal
    EMAIL: sam.witt@gmail.com

    Chase and her two best friend capture a vampire in an Ill-fated attempt to cure Chase's leukemia.

    ReplyDelete
  81. Title: Embrol
    Genre: YA Science Fiction
    Email: abbyannisblog(at)earthlink(dot)net

    To stop the renegade alien sent to Earth to control her, Olivia Ryan must join forces with the boy responsible for her mother’s death.

    ReplyDelete
  82. Title: Destiny's Minions

    Genre: Middle Grade Fiction

    Twitter Pitch: Owen hates destiny. Too bad, because Destiny’s the new headmistress at Owen’s school, and she doesn’t like him much either.

    Email: penny [at] penelopewright [dot] com

    ReplyDelete
  83. Title: The Last Onset
    Genre: YA dystopia
    email: chersti.nieveen (at) gmail (dot) com

    This time Armageddon was planned - a form of Eugenics, where only the government's elected survive.

    ReplyDelete