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Friday, April 06, 2012

Guest Post: The Art of Self Pubbing (Allison Moon)

By now it’s old news that technology is allowing authors more control than ever over their work and their careers.  The question remains, is all this control a good thing for authors? 


Six months ago, I self-published my first novel, Lunatic Fringe.  I took the decision to go the indie route very seriously, and now that the chips have fallen and the book is alive in the world, I’m happy with my choice.  Self-publishing worked for me because I chose it not only for the pragmatic reasons often cited in news stories and blogs. I believed that the indie route worked best for my personality, my book, and my ideology. If you’re weighing your options, allow me to lay out 8 essential tenets I believe are key to finding true satisfaction in the self-publishing realm. There are dozens more variables to consider but I believe these will help you suss out your proclivities and maintain your integrity, ultimately providing more happiness with your choice. 


1) Do it for the right reasons


These may not include: desperation, boredom or fear of rejection.  To be a writer is to deal with rejection, even if you forgo the gatekeepers completely.  The real rejection, the kind that cuts more deeply than that from a jaded new york editor or agent, is the kind you’ll get from readers.  I’ve been lambasted by readers by not having a pro editor (I did), not proofreading (I did), making my book too niche (true, intentionally so), having too much sex (I humbly disagree), having icky sex (i.e. lesbian), having werewolf sex (which doesn’t even happen in the book) taking too long to get to the story, spending too much time on the werewolves, and not enough time on the werewolves.  These are just criticisms from the people who took the time to write reviews. There are undoubtedly more cutting comments to be found among those who didn’t care to write a review.  In real life I’ve also received the response of chilly silence. This is the reality of being a writer. For every reader who says you changed her life, there will be dozens more lining up to complain about the typo on page 189.  If you can’t handle rejection, you may need to work on your self-esteem before you put something so terribly intimate into the world as a book.


Likewise, many people are rushing to self publish out of a desperate need to be heard, or unload the manuscript thinking they’ll make millions.


The fact is, there are ethical, ideological, and pragmatic reasons for self-publishing.  Take some time to figure out why you’re choosing it.  If it’s a last ditch effort after suffering hundreds of rejections, perhaps you should reevaulate the quality of your book to begin with. If you have a love for Maker Culture and the DIY aesthetic, you may be happier with the results of your efforts. I self-published because my book wasn’t a sure thing by anyone’s benchmarks, even small feminist publishing companies.  I knew my book wouldn’t sell enough to support a publishing company’s bottom line, but I suspected it would do well enough to support me.  And taking on the project from start to finish, preserving my radical politics, college setting, and odd stylistic choices worked well for me and my book. If you self-publish as a last ditch effort, that desperation will be visible to most people who see your book. 


2) Do your research


The internet is full of free resources that will answer just about every question you have about indie publishing, and there are message boards full of kind, helpful writers who will fill in the blanks. After I self published my first novel, I fielded so many basic questions that I finally just combined everything I knew into a class I called Self-Publishing 101. I garnered most of the information from reading everything I could and then going through the process of self-publishing myself. You will still make silly, forehead slapping mistakes, but you’ll make fewer of them.  Because this is a new frontier, you have to learn constantly.  Every day it seems like new products, software and distributors are cropping up. Do yourself the favor of staying abreast of these new developments in service of your story. 


3) Learn how to write


I know this sounds redundant and trite, but it’s true.  I once met an author who bragged about going through his manuscript to change all the dialogue tags (“he said”, “she asked”) into more active verbs (“he intoned”, “she inquired”).  While on the surface this sounds okay, the most basic writing guides will tell you to avoid this. My writer friend thought he was making his book more sophisticated, when in reality he was making it far, far worse. I was addicted to adverbs, and some of the originals even squirmed their way into my final manuscript. Do your research. Most of it, again, is free on the internet.  Follow blogs by writers you admire and take their advice. Some of it may annoy you, but like that 7th grade teacher we all had once said: Learn the rules first, then learn how to break them.


4) Enlist support


The worst mistake I see new self-publishers make is headstrong individualism. You get the idea that since you’re “going it alone” in this blissfully defiant way, that you don’t need help. You do. Trust me, you do. If you don’t hire an editor, everyone will know. Okay, maybe a handful of easy-to-please readers won’t care, but you might be surprised at how many people care a lot. Even a casual reader, after a lifetime of reading only professionally vetted and edited books will be annoyed by an unedited book, even if they don’t know why.  
This goes for covers, too. If you don’t know what a Photoshop layer is, outsource your cover. You likely spent a lot of time writing your book. Why would you slap some stock image and bad font on the cover? Unprofessional covers are the biggest sign of a slap-dash book. Even if your book is perfectly crafted and miraculously told, a bad cover will reek of self-publishing stigma and will keep far too many people from buying your masterpiece. 


5) Budget more time and money than you think you need


Paying your graphic designer by the hour? Double your budget for it.  Think you’ll be able to approve your proof right away? Spend a couple days rereading your book and give it to an eagle-eyed friend for typo proofing. You’ll save yourself many headaches by padding your schedule. 


6) Be honest


Transparency endears you to readers, and the internet will eventually figure out if you’re lying.  Grandstanding or bragging about the tons of money you’ve made or the stellar reviews you’ve received isn’t going to impress anyone, especially if you’re exaggerating or lying.  You’re not doing other striving authors any favors by overinflating the realities of self-publishing either. Publishing companies can find out exactly how many books you’ve really sold in about 30 seconds.  Don’t lie. 


7) Love what you do


The #1 rule of marketing is to believe in your product.  If you’re embarrassed by your book cover or that chapter you really should’ve deleted, you’ll never be able to pitch your book to potential readers with integrity.  If you’re ashamed of self-publishing, don’t self-publish. The stigma of self-publishing is built on slap-dash, thoughtless books made by people who didn’t care enough to do it right.  Don’t be one of those people.  Be proud of your accomplishment and endeavor to improve with each book.  


8) Play the Long Game


If you just want to get your book out into the world and never think about it again, you can.  You probably won’t make much money or build a career this way, but you can still do it.  For me, I knew during the writing of my first novel that I was in love.  I wanted to write more books, and I couldn’t wait to finish one to move on to the next.  After my first launch, there was a flurry of activity, but soon that died down and I had to focus on the future. Now, I’m working on the sequel to Lunatic Fringe, plus creating some smaller ebook projects on the side. This is my long game. Do you want to build a reputation with your work? Do you want to use your book to springboard to a new career? Do you want to explore different genres or teach others how to do what you did?  All of these are options and self-publishing can help you get there, but to avoid the post-launch slump, you should have a bigger game than just one book. Whatever that game is, your book is a part of it, but just one part.  Keep striving. Keep writing.


Contributor Bio:


Allison Moon is the author of the novel Lunatic Fringe, which can be summed up in two words: Lesbian Werewolves. When not working on the sequel, she teaches workshops on creativity, writing, & publishing. 

Wednesday, April 04, 2012

Guest Post: Tackling Revisions (Robin Reul)


Tackling revision can be daunting, especially if you've already gone back into the work multiple times to make it shiny and sparkly. You've caught all those typos and grammatical errors, you've made sure your key plot points hit at certain places, you've ensured the stakes are high for your characters, what could there possibly be left to change??

And where do you begin? One of the best gifts you can give your revision is distance and time. The more time you have away from your story, the more you'll be able to come at it with fresh eyes and see what needs attention.

GET REACQUAINTED WITH YOUR STORY

The first thing I do when I revise is treat my book as I would any other book on the market. That is to say, I sit down and read it, preferably cover to cover if I can. I strongly advise printing it out or downloading it to an e-reader such as a Kindle or an iPad. It never ceases to amaze me how many times I can read the book on my computer, but whenever I read it in another form, I catch all sorts of things that aren't working. As you read your story, you will re-immerse yourself in the characters, their world, their dialogue, etc. For me, my natural inclination when I am done is to be able to dive back in and continue on because I am now reconnected to the story and reinvested in those characters. I also suggest reading it through a second time out loud, because that is often the best way to catch long rambling passages of dialogue, or extraneous scenes.

SET GROUND RULES AND REMOVE DISTRACTIONS

Revision, for me, requires total concentration in a different way than writing the actual story. I call it "entering the cave." In order to completely focus on the details of your work, establish basic ground rules with friends and family about getting in touch during the time you will be writing. I usually write from 8:30-2, while my kids are in school, so I ask that unless there is an emergency, please refrain from contacting me during that time unless it is truly essential. Turn off your phone ringer, don't log on to the internet and check your Facebook and Twitter feed, don't schedule lunches and coffee dates and other appointments that can pull you away and become easy excuses to procrastinate. Another thing I do is when I wake up, I start a load of laundry and do whatever dishes may be in the sink. Whatever I can get done housework-wise before I take my daughter to school is what gets done for that day. If I can get to more after my writing day, so be it, but that is my compromise to myself that I'm not just selfishly letting everything go. And if someone doesn't like that, hand them a duster with a smile. 

TAKE YOUR TIME

Do not put yourself on a timetable for revision that is unrealistic (unless one has been imposed on you, obviously.) Revision takes time and requires precision and patience. You want to make sure to catch every small spelling, grammar and punctuation error possible, because these can be easy to miss and collectively add up to an unprofessional looking manuscript. Try and keep in mind that you have one shot with this book, whether it be with an agent considering representing you, or an editor considering it for publication, so you want this work to the the very best it can be. That takes time, and rushing the process so that you can feel like "something is happening" is only cheating yourself out of a great opportunity to make your work shine.

HAVE AN OPEN MIND

We all have a vision for how we want our story to read. However, be willing to keep an open mind when tackling revisions. Share your work with critique partners and listen honestly to their feedback. They may catch something you've never even considered, and it might take you down a new path entirely but it may be a path that makes your story far more interesting. I've said it in several posts here, but my general rule of thumb when it comes to feedback is if one person says it, I take it under consideration and read through the story with an eye for that element. However, if more than one person says it, I change it. Done deal. Because if more than one person says it, it is now an identifiable problem. It's hard to let go of our carefully crafted words, but sometimes it's necessary because it's simply not working.

MAKE NOTES OF YOUR CHANGES

This may seem like stating the obvious, but often we plunge forward making revisions without noting what we've changed. This is an important reference tool later because you may choose to bring some other element back in an edited form, or you may be making changes for an agent or editor and you will be able to let them know what those changes are specifically that you made and why. Obviously, saving older versions of your work is important, but you'd have to reread the older versions to get the complete sense of what has changed from draft to draft.

LISTEN TO YOUR STORY

After you complete each revision, take the time to read the story out loud anew. Even when you think you've covered all your bases, chances are, you will catch one or two more things that are tripping up the flow.

Any revision tips you can recommend? Good luck!

Contributor Bio:

Robin Reul is a contemporary YA author repped by Bill Contardi at Brandt & Hochman, and in her spare time she loves to foster her Facebook addiction, drink copious amounts of caffeine and enjoy her good standing as an equal opportunity cupcake lover. She lives in Southern CA with her husband and two kids. Her novel BAND GEEK is currently on submission after many, many, many revisions. Check out her blog.


Monday, April 02, 2012

Guest Post: Finding Pockets of Writing Time (by Julie Duck)

The winner of my yascavengerhunt is Jenny at tea4my3@gmail.com. Please email me at shelli@srjohannes.com. You have 24 hours to claim.


Blue team winner is Jay Uppal from UK.


Today is the first day of guest posts covering me while I'm on vacation. Thank you to everyone who sent in posts. It was awesome. I will return to blogging Monday, April 16th.

Guest Post Schedule:
4/2 - Finding writing time (Julie Duck)
4/4 - Tacking revisions (Robin reul)
4/6 - The art of self pubbing (Allison Moon)
4/9 - Book trailers (Becki)
4/11 - Marketing postcards (Caroline Rose)
4/13 - Link sharing in publicity (Imogen Reed)

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Finding Those Invisible Pockets of Writing Time

I know of several latent writers who sigh when I tell them I spent the night writing. They usually say, “I want to do that, but I don’t have the time.” I can relate to this statement, which is false, because I must have said it myself 255 times (oddball number for good measure) during the 20 years I spent not writing fiction.

Why is it false? Because there are pockets of time that writers can put their hands into, in order to get things done. Just like taking small steps toward a weight loss goal, a writer can accomplish a great deal by grasping the concept of “little bits” and making it work. Here are a few ways you can find those invisible pockets of time to concept, write, edit and swoon over your stories:

When the kids are taking a bath - You can sit in the bathroom with them, or nearby and hash out ideas and plots. You can even take your laptop or tablet in there with you, although I don’t recommend it because bath time is often tsunami time as well.

Early in the morning – Okay, so you’ll need to make an extra big pot of coffee and be “very, very quiet” to do this, but jumping out of bed to write can not only help you get that precious time in, but start your day on the “write” foot. I think it’s better to write in the morning than exercise, much to my doctor’s chagrin.

Lunch time – Why on earth would you want to write while you’re trying to eat a sandwich and do it all in 60 minutes or less? Because writing is like eating – you have to do it. Your workday break can give you the pocket in which to put a few hundred words, a page here, a page there. It can only put you ahead (make sure you keep all sodas away from the keyboard).

In the dead of night – This is when I write, and I’ll admit it is hard sometimes to sit down, clear out the mind and go for it. You might be tired, but there’s no better way to wake up your brain than write at night. Plus, you can take the excitement of your story to bed with you, which serves to make you feel eager to do it again the next day. If you’re lucky, you might even dream about what comes next in your story.

Waiting – Got a doctor’s appointment? Writing is a better way to spend time in the lobby than reading a mottled copy of Good Housekeeping. Take a pad of paper with you, or your tablet. I’ve put more words down while waiting for medical tests and doctors than I can recall.

Most of all, don’t stuff your pockets with monumental writing goals that make you feel pressured. If you tell yourself that it’s “4,000 words a day or bust,” you’ll only feel like you can’t do it, which is likely because, in reality, most of us cannot. Simply take things in stride, find the moments that work for getting the words in, and the story will unfold before your eyes.

Contributor Bio

Sometimes it takes a swift kick to start doing what you love. For Julie Rieman Duck, it was more like a full body slam. A health scare and loss of her editing job put Julie square in front of a choice: Do what I love, or do nothing? The decision to write again after 20 years of shelving her voice brought about edgy young adult novels, such as the recently released A Place In This Life  and SWELL, little rooms and soon-to-be-released The Joy & Torture of Joshua James.

Today, Julie bounces between copywriting by day, fiction writing by night and never compromising her love for the written word. You can visit her at:


Thursday, March 29, 2012

YA Scavenger Hunt: Kimberly Derting (Blue Team)

Welcome to YA Scavenger Hunt! 

This tri-annual event was first organized by author Colleen Houck to give readers a chance to gain access to exclusive bonus material from their favorite authors and win awesome prizes.

NOTE: I am also giving out my own special prizes below. So don't forget to enter here before you leave at a chance to win even more!

Also - you can read my exclusive chapter of Uncontrollable (the sequel to Untraceable)


The YA Scavenger Hunt - Where do you go?


Go to the YA Scavenger Hunt page to find out all about the hunt. There are THREE contests going on simultaneously, and you can enter all three! I am a part of the BLUE team - but there is also a RED team and a YELLOW team. You can enter all three contests--which has a total prize bucket of 60 signed books!


Follow the hunt, collect clues, and add them up, and you can enter for the prize--one lucky winner will receive 20 signed books from each team (one book from each author on the team!) But play fast: this contest (and all the exclusive bonus material) will only be online for 72 hours!

If you'd like to find out more about the hunt, see links to all the authors participating, and see the full list of prizes up for grabs, go to the YA Scavenger Hunt homepage.


Entering the Scavenger Hunt - What do you do?

Directions:
Hidden within this post is a single letter that is blue. Make a note of this letter! It's a part of a scrambled phrase you will need to win. When you go to all the author sites of the BLUE team, you'll have all the letters you need to enter the BLUE contest. Then if you have time, complete the same process for the RED team and YELLOW team.) 

Entry Form:
Once you piece together all the clues to the BLUE hunt, make sure you fill out the form here to officially qualify for the grand prize. Only entries that have the completed phrase will qualify. You may enter all 3 hunts which means you will have to fill out the form 3 times.

Rules:
Open internationally, anyone below the age of 18 should have a parent or guardian's permission to enter. To be eligible for the grand prize, you must submit the completed entry form by April 1st at NOON PST. Entries sent without the correct puzzle code or without required information may not be considered.


BLUE TEAM SCAVENGER HUNT: Author Kimberly Derting

Today, I am hosting Kimberly Derting. She 
is the author of the BODY FINDER series (HarperCollins), which are as much coming-of-age romance as they are paranormal thrillers, as well as a new dystopic-fantasy trilogy, beginning with THE PLEDGE (S&S)


She lives in the Pacific Northwest where the gloomy weather is ideal for writing anything dark and creepy. Her three beautiful (and often mouthy) children serve as an endless source of inspiration, and often find the things they say buried in the pages of their mother’s books.

About The Last Echo (the 3rd book in Body Finder series):

In the end, all that's left is an echo…

Violet kept her morbid ability to sense dead bodies a secret from everyone except her family and her childhood-best-friend-turned-boyfriend, Jay Heaton. That is until forensic psychologist Sara Priest discovered Violet's talent and invited her to use her gift to track down murderers. Now, as she works with an eclectic group of individuals—including mysterious and dangerously attractive Rafe—it's Violet's job to help those who have been murdered by bringing their killers to justice. When Violet discovers the body of a college girl killed by "the girlfriend collector" she is determined to solve the case. But now the serial killer is on the lookout for a new "relationship" and Violet may have caught his eye.... 

Find out more information by checking out the author website or find more about the author's book here! 

EXCLUSIVE CONTENT:The Bonus is a chapter from The Last Echo
(hint, write this letter down!)


Continue on with the YA Scavenger Hunt for the BLUE TEAM by visiting Abbi Glines!


You can also enter my own giveaway by filling out the form below.


Good luck!


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